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Creating a Well-developed OC


Hello! Welcome to my guide on the creation of a balanced, believable original character! Whether this is your first time creating a character and you want some advice on where to start, or you need to tweak your character, because you're unsatisfied with it, then you've come to the right place. In this guide you'll find details on the importance of every aspect of an OC, from something seemingly insignificant as the name to the powers of a character.

This guide can be applied to original characters of any fandom or purely of your creation for your own story! If your setting doesn't include some parts, like having abilities, you can simply skip over that section. Likewise, if I'm going into details on some specifics that don't apply to your character, feel free to skip over that as well.

Before I get into breaking down a character, let me first start off by asking you to do one thing. Get the term "Mary Sue" out of your head right now before reading this. This will be the only time you'll see the phrase used. Why you ask? I'm not here to judge your OC and label them as being one of those; that's not the reason for my creating this. I personally dislike the term, because half the time people use it without understanding the entirety of what it means. If a person sees one aspect that is considered that, they automatically label the OC as such, which isn't very encouraging. It puts a damper on creativity and is just a negative, ugly term.

In place of that, I'll be using terms such as "undeveloped," "poorly developed," "overpowering," "unrealistic," "unbalanced," etc. (And the "M" word.)

Without further ado, let's begin!

Your Character's Name


You might be wondering if this should really even be on this list, but actually, the name is a very important aspect of your character! It's almost like what the first person sees, and first impressions are pretty important. Some advice:

1. Don't name the character after you. In fact, try your hardest not to basically create an OC version of yourself. This is what people refer to as a "self-insert" and oftentimes relate it to the "M" word. The reason I am against basing a character off you is because it's not very original and even slightly boring. (And then of course there are those assumptions that you're just inserting yourself into the story to live out your fantasy or be with your dream character.)

2. Try not to make up a name. If you suddenly pull a name out of your head like, "Phonesca," it will definitely raise some red flags from critics. There are some exceptions of course, like if a story takes place in the future and everyone has unique names, then it's fine.

3. Keep the fandom/settings in mind. Let's take anime for an example. A majority of them are set in Japan, so more than likely you should think of naming your character a Japanese name. Again, there are always exceptions, but ask yourself if they make sense. Like if the character were visiting from another country, then having a non-Japanese would be fine. However, if your character is fully Japanese and has a name like "Emily," then that wouldn't be very realistic. It's pretty common for people to name their Japanese characters American names.

4. Meanings are important, but let's not take it too far. If your character is cold-hearted and loves the night, be careful about naming them something like "Raven." Let's face it, though your parents know a lot about you, they probably couldn't tell what you would be like when they first named you – so keep that in mind. If the meaning is something general (such as "beauty" or "faith"), then that's fine. Don't try to search names for their meaning to match your character – that's not how it works in the real world.

5. Multiple names…? A bit iffy. That's like if the name was something like, "Marianne Elizabeth-Hudson Lockheart." Kinda crazy to have so many names, and a little unnecessary? Again, being realistic, some Spanish names have more than one last name, and if your character is married and hyphenated their last name, then that's okay. So long as we're being realistic, you don't have to worry about it.

Was that too bad…? Didn't think there was so much to a name, did you? Now onto the looks!

Your Character's Appearance


Another biggie some people use to throw around the "M" word. I'm trying to make this guide general enough to apply to both male and female characters, so bear with me in this section!

1. Modesty, let's not go overboard now. And this is calling for some modesty on your part. When describing your OC, try not to use biased descriptive words, like actually calling your character "beautiful, sexy, gorgeous, handsome, etc." People get a bit iffy when you're very attached to your character; let the people decide for themselves if the character is beautiful or not! Likewise, in the canon world, be careful of having every single character fawn over your OC. If the canon character naturally ogles, then that's okay. And if every other character is jealous over how good looking your OC is, then that's also a problem. You don't want to exude them as being too much in any category.

However! It's absolutely okay to make your OC beautiful! And by that, applying to females, you don't have to feel obligated to make her flat chested in worriment over what critics will say. I find that very silly. It's a little strange to see that people feel the need to make "average" characters, if we're truly being realistic; there are tons of good-looking people in this world. But like I said before, modesty. We're modest people here. (Now, that doesn't mean your OC has to be. But we'll go onto personality later.)

2. Don't stand out for the sake of standing out. Be careful on making some unique feature for your character. For example, pink hair is rarely natural; so mention your character dying it at some point. And purple eyes, if you really want them to have that, say they have colored contacts. Yes, there are some fandoms where that's natural, and if that's the case, don't worry about it. Also I wouldn't be so hasty on giving a natural tattoo that the person was born it that holds some special meaning…it's a little overdone.

3. OMG BOOBS. Sorry, I have to specifically go into females now! Breasts. I have nothing against large breasts, but if you're only making your character have them to score some points with male fans, then I think that's a very shallow reason right there. And please, please, don't use the excuse that anime creators make female characters with horrendously large breasts, they have NO idea what it's like. My friend is actually getting breast reduction surgery because the size of her breasts are causing her back problems…it's not so great when you think of it that way now, is it?

4. Your character should have a natural style of dress. I don't have much to say about this one, except can I say that their wardrobe should correlate with the character's personality? If your female OC wears a mini skirt and super tight shirt, but is very innocent and shy, does that really work together well…? …Not really. However, sometimes things like that can be pretty interesting, like a guy has a lot of tattoo and piercings and looks completely frightening, but he's actually a sweetheart.

Your Character's Past


Unless your OC is a baby, he/she should have a past, most definitely. It sets the stage up for the rest of the story and it's actually helpful to you. Yes, you have to take your time in creating it, but if you're writing a story or even in an RP, you can pull elements from that to thicken the plot and add more depth. Notice how I said, "take your time"…because I mean it. A past thrown together in five minutes is pretty half-assed; excuse my language.

1. Oh…woe is me! One of the biggest reasons people use the "M" word is when they see a character with a ridiculously tragic past, and I actually agree with this. To me, it completely throws a character off-balance. You don't have to try and garner tons of sympathy for your character to make people like them. That's not the best way to go about doing that. So let's list some tragic events people often put:

- Raped
- Beaten
- Abandoned
- Poor
- Adopted
- Kidnapped
- Enslaved
- Abused in some other way
- Experiencing a parent's divorce
- Losing someone (or witnessing their death)
- Amnesia (poor excuse to not create a past)
- Having the life of nobility (and despising it)

Now, ask yourself this, "Do people really go through all of this?" The first one is my absolute "NO NO." Unless you do extensive research on the effect it has on rape victims, then I suggest you not use it at all. This is a very touchy topic and if you put it in some fluffy, teenage way, then you're basically slapping anyone who's had to suffer through it across the face with such a poor representation. So don't do it.

I honestly don't completely understand why people feel the need to dump so much tragedy on their character, it's almost as if you hate them! If you want to add some slight tragedy, elaborate on it and make it seem more realistic. For example, if the person lost their mother (a huge cliché, but we'll still use it), let's be reasonable: that person will not angst over that loss every second of the day. If you lost someone and told someone about it, and that person says "sorry," you're not going to burst into tears about it unless it happened recently.

So with all that in mind, remember that all characters have good and bad things in their past, and unless their life just sucked, the majority of it should be relatively decent.

Your Character's Powers


Not all characters are going to have this, so if this doesn't apply to your OC then you can just go on to the next section. However, more often than not, your OC is going to be involved in some original storyline or fandom in which powers play a key role. Personally, I'm not very fond of this part of the character-making process; so pardon me if this section seems less than adequate.

1. Your character is not God. In an RP the term would be "godmodding." A character that is ridiculously strong and overpowering is simply one people don't want to roleplay with. And for fanfiction, how boring is it if your OC already has every power imaginable and can defeat anyone with ease? This a balanced character does not make. So tone it down a little and come up with some weaknesses so that people know your OC isn't the most perfect thing in the universe.

2. All-in-one? I don't think so. Think carefully about creating a hybrid OC in mixing two or more races, or creating an entirely new one when ones already exist in the fandom. I prefer to stay true to canon, but you don't necessarily have to.

Yeah, that section was short. Now we get on to my favorite!

Your Character's Personality


To me, it's this part that makes or break a character, and so many fall short when it comes to describing their character's personality.

1. Traits, you gotta have the good and the bad. When creating a character, you can't just slap on two or three characteristics and call it a day. Do you think you could describe a real person using only, "nice, smart, funny?" What about stubborn? Impatient? Happy go-lucky? Easily angered? You're obviously going to be missing something. But let's take it the other way, you can't just pile on traits that don't even flow together, like, "he's really rebellious, yet still respects his elders." Wait…what? That doesn't make sense at all. Some paradoxes can work, but not many do.

And you have to remember that for every good trait you give your OC, there should be a bad one as well. And I wouldn't necessarily count "shy" as being a good or bad trait, to me it could go either way or is neutral. If you're really struggling to find some flaws for your character's personality, here's some websites that should help: cte.jhu.edu/techacademy/web/20… www.gurusoftware.com/GuruNet/P…

2. Show a little quirkiness. One of the things I personally like to know about a character is their likes and dislikes, what they do for fun, what kind of food do they like, what are their dreams, etc. I especially find it unique to put something unusual in, like just some strange hobby that makes you go, "Huh? Well, that's different." But in a good way! I believe putting these things in makes the character seem more human and easier to relate to, like you can imagine sitting next to that person.

Your Character in Love


This part mostly has to do with if you've paired your OC up with a canon character of a fandom, but it can also work for OC x OC couples.

1. Are we turning this into a teen chick flick? What I mean by this is, how corny is it? Are you using every cliché in the book? We don't want your love story to be the typical cookie cutter romance do we? It's uninteresting and unoriginal. Your relationship to you is unique and special, but you have to convince others of that by giving them something they haven't seen before. Originality. Uniqueness. The unexpected – within reason of course. Here are some clichés I'd try and stay clear of:

- Love at first sight (very unrealistic and uncommon, it's also more interesting when you actually show the development of the relationship and some problems before the two characters actually get together)
- Love triangles (this sets some people off especially if it's canon x OC x canon. The "M" word is used here, because they assume your OC is special and wonderful enough to attract the love of more than one person)
- Not doing justice to the canon character (if the canon character or OC love interest is someone cold-hearted or not one to typically be interested in love, you have to work very hard to make the relationship develop naturally)
- Sex after a short amount of time (It's tacky)
- Dying for the other person

Your Character and the Plot


This means both the plot of your fanfic/original story or the plot of an RP that is ongoing.

1. Keep check on the hero complex. Your character will probably be the focus of the plot, however, you want to make sure that you're not surging them through every obstacle effortlessly. Yes, they will triumph, but with time, hard work, and impediments along the way. After all, nothing comes easy. Everyone shouldn't automatically befriend your character, because it's more interesting when there's some conflict between characters. However, I'd suggest not making your character hate the character you personally despise…again with the self-insert concept mentioned earlier. Your character is not you, or at least it shouldn't be. To create a well-balanced character, it almost has to have a mind of its own. That means its thoughts are different from your own, so that it can stand on its own. Also, when you create a character that is unlike you, you won't be so emotionally attached to it. And that brings us to our final topic:

Your Character and Criticism


Yes, it's awful when your character is called an "M" word. That's why if you base it off yourself and someone insults or criticizes it, you take it as a personal attack, because your OC basically is a version of yourself. So don't do that.

My suggestion to you is to be open to criticism and not immediately lash out on the person giving it. And yes, be able to tell the different between a harsh criticism and someone who just wants to be mean (a "flamer"), because there is a difference. A person that points out something they don't find quite right isn't necessarily trying to bash you, but may genuinely find a detail unrealistic or feel that it doesn't make sense.

Now, that doesn't mean you'll never come across someone that doesn't just hate your character's guts. It may be out of jealousy or for whatever reason, don't let it get to you. Stray from the negative side and instead divert your attention to the positive feedback you receive, and I can almost guarantee you that the good outweighs the bad. It's okay if not every person in the universe doesn't like your character, not everyone can be pleased.

And if when you're creating your OC you try to make it so that ever person will find your character "adorable," "sexy," or "badass," then you might as well just stop right there. Just stop. There's no need to continue making your character, because it's not even yours anymore. It belongs to all those people you're trying to make happy, all the people you want to like your OC. You're not doing any justice to your creativity and abilities. Don't make a character to please others, make an OC that you are happy with. Who cares what others think? In the end, it's only your satisfaction that matters.

So long as you put your heart into what you create, that will always be good enough.
Hey guys, I was finally able to make this! I've been wanting to write some advice on creating an original character for a while, but never got around to it until today!

Firstly, this advice is not the words of God. So it's completely find if you disagree with some parts, find it inaccurate, or what have you. All of this I compiled from my own (painful) experience in original character creation; from the many Mary Sue tests I've taken to researching character flaws and looking at some amazing original characters. Also, pardon the bit of sarcasm laced in this article. I can't help it. I'm a naturally sarcastic person.

That being said, this is in no way based off of any original character. All of this is generalized information that I've come to conclude help creating a balanced OC. So if you feel that I may be describing your OC in some part, don't take it personally, the only OC I had in mind while making this was my own: Marise Asahina.

Depending on the feedback I get from this, I may create an example using Marise to show each part, because I kind of feel that it's sometimes hard to really understand new information unless you apply it to something, and so by showing an example I feel that would help people understand this advice better. But I'm not sure yet.

If you feel that I may be missing something that should be up there, feel free to let me know; I might just put it in. :)

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I love this so much.
For me, it was a little hard to read some of this, especially the part about naming. My OC is named Madison Yattamori right now as I write this, and my name is Maddie King, which many think is short for Madison (IT IS NOT), so she has been called a Mary-Sue at least a few times. And, her first name is american based, so it does help. So, I'm renaming her. I totally agree with not making up a name, because I have tried, and it's only worked once (Calankaiana (Ca-lan-kai-on-a) yeah...she was eqyptian), LOL, as well as multiple names. I luckily have kept in line with the character appearance very well (see Yattamori in my gallery), though I'm ashamed to say I have given her a tragic past in which she did die, and come back, though she luckily doesn't have a bad personality in which the story relies on much of it. I absolutely don't hate her! I just did this because I wanted her to have a stronger bond with the main cannon character in the story, mine being Toshiro Hitsugaya from Bleach, though I must admit I have put a lot of tragic twists in the story, but it turns happy in the end, so it's all good! I did give Yattamori power, but not undefeatable power, so it's good there.
Sorry, but I'm comparing my character to this so you know what I was thinking when I read it. ^^
Luckily, I did give her a good personality, with good and bad, and I do have a long way of explaining her, as well as not many paradoxes ^^. Her quirks become more known as well continue in the story, especially how she hates when she's called "Captain Yattamori", or ma'am, seeing as how she believes in equality. The romance doesn't show up for a while my fanfic, though I definitely will try not to get super cheesy!! But warning, Toshiro will smile more LOL. I'm good with plot, and criticism has been given, but I'm luckily the type of person that explains stuff , so I'm good. One girl did get under my skin once by totally bashing Yattamori, ending her review with saying "Burn your mary-sue alter-ego and come back with something decent", though I let it go, and nothing bad has happened since.
Continue doing OC guides like this, it will definitely help those out who don't understand some of this stuff, maybe writing something about over used character designs and plots?
Keep writing this stuff, you've definitely helped me. Oh, and b sure 2 visit Yattamori and me at my page soon. ^^
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I really love this guide and to tell you the truth I really find it helpful even though I never found my Serenity to be a Mary-Sue due to a quiz I once took and trust me Serenity's was a passing score so yay she was never a Mary-Sue in the first place~! : D Anyways, I was going to say that this does help other people create characters a whole lot and also I agree with you 100% on this guide I mean the outfit part does make a whole lot of sense when it comes to shy and innocent characters like I said before. Now onto the criticism part...yes there will be good and bad criticism but the main thing is never let others bring you down because not many people will like your character even when well-developed. I am actually happy you made this guide, amber-sky. C: Keep up the good work on your guides and tips, my dear. ^__^
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Onisatsu18 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! This is really helpful! :D Can you look at my OC profiles and tell me what you think? I would appreciate your opinions :)
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Narwhalicorn123 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
This is really helpful, thanks!
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Onaya-Chan Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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I doing it all wrong and people still love my OC's...
I always make them the total opposite of what I think they should be xD
Well I better save this.
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DTackle59 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
This was an excellent read. Your guidelines and observations on character creation and developing was very informative! I will keep this in mind when I create my next original character. 
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TheFoxChild1 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I agree on most things.But on the characters past, you can make a bad past but it has to affect the OC some way.Some canon characters have bad pasts, so why can't an OC?There are many ways a past can affect the OC.From physical apperances to personality traits.But there is one thing tnat isn't an acception.For example, lets say some OC was abused.You can't just let the OC cling onto another person or stay and let the abuse happen.So I personally think its okay to have a bad past as long as it affects them in some way.
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
There's absolutely nothing wrong with having a troubled/tragic/bad past. It becomes a problem when it's there for the sole purpose of garnering sympathy for the character without adding to who they are or pushing the story any further. Every event and aspect of a character's life should have a purpose, especially if it's something huge like a tragic event. Authors tend to dance around the subject or are WAY to overdramatic with it, to the point where it is unrealistic. There are many people who live without their mothers who read some stories and are like, "Okay, this person without their mom is not realistic at all." Or if the character was raped and ends up falling in love with their rapist...WTF??? That's so insulting to rape victims. For certain tragic events, authors need to do their research. If you've never gone through the experience, you can't just guess how a person would feel or act in that situation. 
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A-Blue-Bubble Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the setting is also important when it comes to 'tragic pasts'. If your oc lives somewhere where there is a lot of poverty it isn't a stretch that they'd be poor. I agree that it's all about making it realistic and relevant, it should have a purpose, or at least make sense
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gaboal Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
This is cool advise, it doesn't only work for fanfics, but for an actual, sepparate story/book, basically your own.
Although the part with the character's past... IRL some really shitty things happened to people, like, raped and then got their family killed and shit, so with drama you have an endless amount of things to work with, but I agree that sometimes it seems like you really hate your character, but it can come off as rather neat seeing that poor little thing that suffered through everything and became later on an amazing person, you have to know how to do this tho, because I have read things that are really off putting, a character went through shit but it was as if nothing happened to them and they got praise because of how "strong they are" for that... it doesn't feel alive someone that doesn't bitch about things or that doesn't cry once in a while, it's cringeworthy even... and I dunno why I wrote all of this.
Anyways, cool thing you've wrote here, I'm about to start a big project and I need all the help I can get with it, so thank you for this thing, if someone asks me about how to make a character, I'll send them this.
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I think there's a difference between excessive tragedy and having your character struggle. Everyone goes through problems but I've tended to notice that many underdeveloped characters have had extremely tragic pasts with them barely addressing it in the story line other than to have it as a pity party. Honestly, what I wished more people would do is to put in that tragic event in the current times and NOT in the past to actually show how the OC goes through it and deals with it at the moment it happens and then thereafter. Then later on you can present it as a past event, but the reader now has SUCH a better sense of what it was actually like and how it contributes to the story. 
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gaboal Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
Yeah there is a difference, I think I worded that wrong before, sorry for that. And it's actually true, those things are usually done for the characters to have a "pity party" (sounds rather funny XD) and then they go on like nothing happened. I have to work on this thing for it to not seem weird, damn writing's hard, it's one of it's charms though.
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kevintheradioguy Featured By Owner May 10, 2015  Professional Writer
Good one! Although, I would argue with a title. It's more alike to 'How to create a non-Mary character' to me, but, hey, what do I know about life?

Sometimes I actually want to print something like this and throw into some authors faces. Before I chill and remember it takes time to learn, and another all-powerful beauty is just a first step in character creating. I've learned that after reading my little sister's fiction, as, while having her brother who had fallen into numerous traps during his lit life before being published a few times, she still made such typical Mary Sue characters. I realized you can't actually learn that on mistakes of others. Some things are meant to be 'overgrown'.
That doesn't mean the urge to throw printed guides into faces of some doesn't come back on occasions, tho.
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Haha I guess the title could be argued. I just said that to avoid using the term Mary Sue, which I believe to be underdeveloped or unrealistic characters.

And I know exactly what you mean! I don't read as much as I used to in high school, but honestly sometimes I am shocked at how simple the characters are that I don't even understand how the book became published. I think having well-thought out characters has just been replaced with sex and/or action. But yeah the characters I made in the beginning were not good but through others' advice and my own research I learned to make them better, so that's why I try not to be too harsh with people.
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StanX618 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
I would like to add something to the part were you talked about overpowered OCs. If you are going to make your OC overpowered, make them overpowered by HUMAN standards. Take Superman for example, its way WAY more fun to see him fight someone stronger and smarter then him than some thug on the street. Your OC should have enemies that are almost as strong/skilled or far stronger/skilled. I personally like to see powerful characters fight even more powerful characters than them and have a hard time to figure them out. Thus forcing your OC to actually put thought into taking their enemy down.
I'm gonna try to make my own comic and this was super helpful. Thanks for posting this!
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, for sure, except maybe in the case in which the character is not even human. I know of many fandoms that is based off of demons, witches, and other supernatural creatures, in which case it would make sense for their powers to go above and beyond what a human is capable of doing. But that dynamic is definitely more interesting to see the struggle and them pushing in it. It's safe to assume that the good guy usually comes out on top, but no one wants to see it happen in like 2 seconds.
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StanX618 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
So true.
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frogben Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
what is the m word
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Mary Sue haha.
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MangaShanPrincess Featured By Owner Edited Apr 24, 2015  Student Writer
The 'M' Word refers to the term "Mary Sue" - the definition is mentioned in the article.
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ShadowMaster9 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
I made a character and his name is Osamu, which means "cold, logical", he was a member of the Hyuga clan who left the Hidden Leaf to be his own person, sick of tradition. He is a part of the Side branch but unlike the other members he is proud of his status and leaves his forehead, where his curse mark is, bare. He wears tight clothing, as opposed to traditional Hyuga garb (but not as revealing as Sai, or as tight as Gai and Lee's jump suit). He keeps his hair short, and after all of his time away from the hidden leaf, he has adapted the Gentle fist style, opting to use it to do in a way closer to the Taijutsu that Guy and Lee uses, but he is not as strong at using raw power as they are. So he basically uses his style as a double insurance policy, those that can't be injured physically, are injured internally with Gentle fist, and vice versa. He can be very headstrong, but in his own quiet and stoic way. Very sarcastic, enjoys cooking and drinking tea, especially matcha. (And he's really good at it). Wears black and purple and fingerless gloves. When necessary, he can summon a scythe, which he attaches to his leg and uses break dancing type moves to wield it, and as a result he is very agile, though he needs to make sure that no innocents are in range when he does use it. Has a special attack as a last resort where he launcheshis opponent into the air with and hits them with a barrage of, well, hits, with each successive strike hitting a chakra point while also doing increasingly high damage to the opponents bones and muscles. This move ends with Hazan Strike.(Think a substantially weaker hidden lotus mixed with 64 palms and ending with the aforementioned hazan Strike) The drawback is that all of his chakra is drained and he is put in a coma for 1 week. Meets a homeless girl while he is away for the hidden leaf, and raises her for 3 years, after which she finds a family, and during that time grows to be very protective of her and breaks his stoic demeanor if she is in danger.


That's what I got so far...working on his flaws and Backstory....
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Honestly, I'm not too familiar with Naruto, but your character sounds very interesting and well-thought out so far!
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ShadowMaster9 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015
Yay!!! The other problem is drawing him, but I'll figure that out!!!! XD
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ThatAngelGotArt Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Umm, so both of my OC characters are naturally  aggressive, but they love each other. Is it fine for them to occasionally get so ticked that they can't help themselves and try to beat each other up? It would be a rare thing, but... You know.
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
So they're in a romantic relationship together? Is it actually abusive or playful? It depends on the route you take it, but sure, this can work. Big personality traits that are the same in two partners in a relationship is definitely common.
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ThatAngelGotArt Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It is playful, though the main character sometimes wonders if they're just scary by nature. They make up quickly, mostly because they have more important matters that require them to be friendly with each other at the least,  as they are both leaders.
Thank you for the information, by the way~
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A-Elegant-Star Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this is pretty insightful. I'm currently thinking on making a magician type of character who works at what I'd call a Dark Carnival . Of course the attraction is only around in October, but I'm thinking maybe the attraction can have a since of mystery to it.

I have a feeling I will have to think long and hard over this one. I'm sure my imagination can think of something XD.
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I'm sure! Hopefully when you flesh out this character more you'll be able to use this guide as a reference.
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gangnart16 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
As someone who is currently creating a majority of OC characters as part of a little comic series I hope to get started on soon, I found this very, very helfpul! Thank you so much for this info!
:D (Big Grin) 
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
No problem, I'm glad you found it useful!
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MarioXMariana Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
I SO need this....my character isn't in the best shape as of now.
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I hope it will help!
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MarioXMariana Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015
thanks ^^
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Silver-DragonTH Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
Clap  Great job! I like it! It's really helpful!
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! Glad it was.
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flarefluttershy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Student Artist
This helped me a lot thanks for making this~
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! I'm glad it helped.
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flarefluttershy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Student Artist
Welcome
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jdevillo Featured By Owner Edited Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know I probably sound dumb but here goes~ What is the M word? I was wondering if it was "moe", but that doesn't make sense in all contexts. Is M for Mary-Sue?
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes it is haha. (:
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Frozarburst Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks! This really helps because I have a character that I don't want to end up looking like a Sonic or My Little Pony fan fiction.
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad it could help!
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Frozarburst Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Student General Artist
I have several of my characters that are going to appear in a fan fiction next year only to be tested to see how well they can adapt to a story I put them in so I can use them for official stories. Don't worry, they're not Mary Sues or template characters.
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lolabunny613 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!!
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome!!
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91vadpire Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
My results varied and the name could maybe be a Mary-sue but it was a good oc
i made purru-chan rose princess and starline :o
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So long as you feel your OC is well-rounded and you're happy with it that's all that matters!
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91vadpire Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks to you I created a very cute alien girl :bow:
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm glad I could be of some service. :D
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PawsTheKitty Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is absolutely astonishing! My oc has never been called a Mary-sue, but has been yelled at for "not making sense". But what I find funnny is when I do roleplays, wheither its with people or with my Otto (Japanese for husband), I don't always make sense. I do stupid things for fun! Because why not? When I have realistic Rps I play by the book though. But when I have silly or different kind of Rps I like to have fun with it. Just because I do something in a silly Rp doesn't mean my character can do ANYTHING. Or is INVINCIBLE. My characters weakness is water and Hail. She isn't stronger then everyone but has decent fighting skills. She has flame techniques but that's really it. She has many flaws such as laziness, clumsyness, Adhd and more. She's not exactly all mature. Though she is 19. There's a lot more about my Ocs on my file, Ill be making a fanfic soon if you'd like to read up. Thanks for reading this! ^^ Love your tips aswell!
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amber-sky Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well so long as everyone you are roleplaying with understand you're doing it for fun, then why not? It's honestly really fun sometimes to go OOC with your OC or have them in an AU or just do something different from their norm just to experiment and have fun. It's not like you're permanently changing them or trying to make them perfect. I'm glad you liked it! 
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Darkton93 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
I've made a lot of OCs, and each one I'm worried they may become a Sue. This will help keep that from happening. Thank you.
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